I must say, as much as I enjoyed reading what you had to say, I couldnt help but lose interest
after a while. Its as if you had a fantastic grasp to the topic matter, but you forgot to include your readers.
Perhaps you should think about this from extra than 1 angle.
Or maybe you shouldnt generalise so very much.
Its better if you think about what others may have to say
instead of just heading for a gut reaction to the topic.
Think about adjusting your personal believed process and giving others who may read
this the benefit of the doubt. |